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Nobody knows who I really am
I never felt this empty before
And if I ever need someone to come along,
Who's gonna comfort me, and keep me strong?


It was pain that left her gasping as she did, pain that caused her eyes to blur with annoying tears. A tremble shook her entire body and a squeak of tired pain could be heard from the small she-cat. Her tortoiseshell pelt was covered with forest debris, caked mud and a mixture of what was probably still dried blood clinging to her pelt. The beautiful colours that once occupied her fur wasn't even noticeable anymore, the only colour still standing out was the vivid green of her eyes. Enhanced by the fever that raged through her body, leaving her eyes with a somewhat glassy and confused look. Finally the stumbling she-cat stopped moving, sitting down with a thud. Her chest heaved and she let out a hiccuping sob as she tried to control her breathing. Never had she been in so much pain before, it was the first time in her entire life that she had let something get to her head. Look where I've ended up now. Maybe next time I should think before attacking someone. Slowly she shook her head and than let out a soft groan as she rose to her paws once more. She could feel the pain racing up her spine, back and forth. Over and over again, the pain reverberated through every muscle in her body and her head was beginning to throb. Slowly she let herself breathe in and out, calming herself so that she could move with better ease. Her left paw stretched forward, testing how much weight her injured shoulder could take. Instant hot and fiery pain raced up her leg and left her gritting her teeth.

"Nooo," she moaned softly, clenching her teeth. Her green eyes flicked down to look at her wound, wincing at the fresh blood that was welling there. It seemed that no matter how many times she cleaned it and rested her shoulder it still seemed to get dirty and reopen. Maybe it was cause of the tiring hunting she kept putting herself through, failing miserably every time. Although she still managed to run herself through dirt and muck, which probably caused her wound to look so well downright nasty. Turning her head away quickly she let her eyes travel over the forest ground. A scent of mouse assaulted her nostrils and it left her mouth watering. Unaware of the border she was hobbling over the she-cat moved cautiously forward. Scenting for the creature that would possible fill her stomach, something that she desperately needed. Just thinking of that made her stomach growl and she let her hunger enhance her scenting skills. There you are! Finally something to fill my belly. With agonizing slowness she moved herself forward, trying desperately to ignore the pain that flickered through her body. Instead she merely concentrated on the small mouse that sat nibbling a piece of seed, or something else that seemed unimportant to the she-cat. Finally she felt she was close enough to let herself try crouching, but the moment she lowered herself she sucked in a sharp breath. Instantly the mouse sat up, alerted at the sound, only hesitating a few seconds before it bolted.

"Fox-dung!" She screeched as she attempted to rush forward. Her body collapsed on itself and she lay there stunned in the dirt, her chest heaving with failing hunt. Tears flooded to her eyes once more and she felt like cursing herself ten times over for her stupid mistake. Here she was turning into a sniveling wimp just because she was hungry and hurt. Dad would be so mad if he could see me right now. I can almost hear the words pouring from his mouth. You stupid worthless she-cat get off your butt and try again. Never give up fighting, never ever. Despite the somewhat encouraging words ringing through her head she could not make herself move. The mere thought left more tears to pour down her muzzle and she could only lay there completely helpless. Like a broken flower.


We are all rowing the boat of fate
The waves keep on coming and we can't escape
But if we ever get lost on our way
The waves would guide you through another day


Word Count:; 684
Muse:; Not to horrible
Character Mood:; Horrified, just plain tired.
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i will never let you down
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Ferns quivered, rustled; stirred by unseen gray paws. The foliage was thick enough to provide cover of the sort not even the most wary mouse could penetrate, and his natural coloring—stone with a hint of shadow—added another dimension of camouflage to the warrior’s current position. Of course, he was not technically hunting, though he’d had the good luck to snare a fat sparrow just outside of camp whose tiny body he’d dropped proudly onto the fresh-kill pile. That was all irrelevant, as of the moment, however—for now Riptalon simply waited, flattened muzzle raised high to sample the taste of the hot, dry sunshine as it cascaded warmly down through the gaps in the canopy overhead. This part of the forest was thick, very much so, and the complete absence of even a whisper of wind added to the oddly thick feeling around them. Border patrol. A small party of warriors scouting the fringes of ThunderClan territory, wary of every pawprint to cross their paths, ready to fight at a moment’s ambush. Though hopefully this is just routine and we won’t have to. I don’t like the thought of a fight at the moment. In truth, despite the giant tom’s formidable appearance, he never looked forward to a fight, or indeed, even hurting another cat’s feelings. A gentle giant with a ferocious façade.

A moment later, the small ears barely visible through the verdous sedge flicked and he called, ”Okay. Let’s go.” Finally the face emerged from the heavy brush and it came into full, terrifying view. A round, cold gray face, flattened and broad, with a pair of reptilian yellow eyes whose depths glittered like frozen sunlight. The rest of him as he materialized matched his face and frigid expression; a huge, grizzly, slate-colored body with battle scratches marked deep in his haunches and one long slash which cut a jagged scar across his soft belly. Four huge paws, with the faint shadows of massive, hooked claws etched on their supple tips. They were soundless on the soft turf as the fearsome deputy padded forward, but the sound of his voice had easily betrayed the heart his appearance concealed—soft, velvety, friendly. There was hardly a sweeter cat in all of ThunderClan beneath the face he wore, petrified and etched in stone, against his will. For the first half of his life, he’d spent his days practically outcast for the rage his eyes affected, when all he wished was to be loved as he loved the Clan…

Shaking his broad head as if he could fling away the memories, Riptalon looked up brightly, inhaling deeply the stale scents around them. The summer heat choked the forest in golden heat, but his pelt was already getting ready for the harsh leaf-bare to come and he felt like he was about to keel over from heatstroke. Honeyleaf would just love that. Me, in her den, again. I just can’t stop getting ripped apart and getting pneumonia and whitecough and heatstroke and all that. He stifled a laugh at the thought of the young medicine cat coming back into her den only to find the deputy crumpled unconsciously in the corner again. At least I wouldn’t be covered in blood. Just shed hair. A light purr rumbled deep in his chest as he turned his head, long whiskers fanning out inquisitively from his flattened muzzle. The streaks and bars of slightly darker fur gave him the appearance that fragile tree-branches cast smudges of shadow flowing across his ashen pelt. For a moment, the faintest breeze ruffled and cooled his stormy pelt, and he sighed in pleasure, but the taste of air brought more than just relief from the heat. In surprise, Riptalon pricked his ears and murmured, ”Wait.” Inhaling deeply, slanted yellow eyes narrowing, they rapidly widened a moment later. ”There’s fresh cat-scent here,” the deputy murmured, dipping his tiny gray nose almost to the earth as he inhaled. He was not the best tracker, as his smaller olfactory senses made it much harder to pick up smell—but he knew an intruder when he smelled it. Riptalon sneezed, an action which almost blew him off his feet, and looked back up, eyes watering. ”There’s someone on our territory. We’d better be prepared to chase them off.” His eyes darkened as he turned back into the breeze. ”Wait for me. Or follow. I don’t know. Just… I’m going to go check it out.” His uncertain voice halted as the faintest cry came to his ears, and abruptly he sprung into motion.

Who is it? His senses were not strong enough to tell whether the feline was of a Clan or if it was merely a rogue wandering through—he couldn’t even tell what gender the cat was! I don’t want to fight, but we can’t afford to lose prey. We’re still skinny enough as it is. Flinching at the thought of unsheathing the talons within his heavy paws, Riptalon stopped for a moment behind a wall of undergrowth, lurking for a moment. The scent was heavy now, and now that he was close he could distinguish the tang of sickness heavy in the air. It was strong enough that it masked all other information. The cat was close. Slowly, Riptalon peered around the bush, and was surprised by what he saw.

A she-cat, pelt mottled with brown and orange stripes on top and a white underbelly beneath, sat with tears spilling down her filth-encrusted cheeks. Dirt and mud were caked especially on one shoulder, and Riptalon’s sharp yellow eyes picked out the dark glint of blood and the sour scent of a festering wound which made him recoil in revulsion and sympathy. He realized this was not a Clan cat—no Clan would allow such an injury to go untreated. This was a rogue, or a loner, and she was desperately hurt. The green eyes who spilled such tears had a strange, glossy sheen to them that made Riptalon distinctly unhappy. As he studied her, in his painful empathy he almost forgot that she was an intruder here, on ThunderClan land, and had surely attempted to steal prey though evidently with such an injury she had failed. But she was so thin—every rib stuck out at right angles from her pelt, and Riptalon’s stomach rumbled queasily. I would try to hunt here too, if I was starving. He watched her with pain in his eyes, and indecision—what would he do? What happened to this loner, that she got to be like this? After a moment, he shook his shaggy head, growled once to himself, and pushed himself through the brush.

Imposing, a feral, unmovable mountain of unyielding stone, Riptalon came into view. Once he’d pulled the tip of his stormy tail through the growth into the clearing, he simply sat down, lamplike eyes wary and frighteningly cold, and waited quietly. Not a fur on his grizzly pelt was stirred, he was merely frozen, only the slow rise and fall of his strong chest to show he was anything more than a cold statue. After a long moment, thoughtfully appraising her, he spoke, and he tried to make his words cold but found it difficult to hide the note of sympathy and a slight worry that resonated within his tenor voice. ”I hope you’re aware that you’re trespassing,” the dark tom reproved quietly, trying to sound stern but the alarm he felt at the cat’s condition filtering in. There was only so mean he could be, and attacking a terribly ill she-cat who was crying her eyes out on their territory would have gone against everything he believed in. Slowly, he rose back up and took an unwilling, uncertain step towards the loner, adderlike gaze direct and, almost guiltily, concerned.

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I'm trying to keep my feet on the ground
I'm learning to like this feeling I've found
I'm learning to love
The thought of having you around
And I will never let you down.

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Light flitered in through small patches in the warriors den where the Bracken had been removed to let the air circulate. In recent months the den had been more then cramped with warriors, but now it was more comfortable. Of course if the clan didn`t have to lose those they loved for a little space,then this wouldn`t bother her. Nighthunter stretched and stood, her Amber eyes gleamed with the freshness of a new day.She licked her paw and nudged it across her eyes and near her scar. Her mate Ashpatch wasn`t there, so perhaps he was already out hunting. Perhaps she would see him later. For now she needed to meet up with Riptalon for a patrol. Nighthunter had been out on the last patrol the other night, but all her fatigue from then had left her limbs. She loved Riptalon like a father, and she would always be there for him. The tough looking tom that others saw, she knew was a sweet heart. He could never hurt a fly, and had won her respect over on mulitiple occasions. She giggled to herself recalling her assesment for her warrior name. Riptalon had been there, and the conditions outside were less then bearable, but somehow they survived the adders and rainfall and made it back in one piece. Since then she has been working hard to make up for the moons that she had spent watching her kits. That brought more thoughts. They were to be apprenticed soon. Little Burninkit and Roughkit were ready and she knew that they were going to be great warriors someday. Aftterall there parents had survived through there troubles and trials, so why not them too. However she was worried about Stoneflowers kits, espeacially Rainkit. Nighthunter had tried her best to guide there paws as there mother would have, but she knew that she could never be there for them like Stoneflower could have been. Raintkit more then the others was famous for getting into all sorts of mischief, and what was worse still, was that Roughkit insisted on trying to stop her. Not that she blamed her son for trying to be noble, but she didn`t want him to fall into tragedy because of her. She shook her head and tried not to think of such things. Now was not the time for it, and she would have to discuss Rainkit with Riptalon and Ashpatch later. For now her duty called her to patrol. She dashed out of the camp heading towards where she had agreed to meet Riptalon.

It was a relativly decent day. The sun was high, and yet the earth cool to the touch. Her grey tabby paws stamped lightly as she marched through the shrubs and leaped fallen trees that once looked as giant as those still standing. She looked behind her every so often to make sure that her son Burningkit wasn`t following her. He had become quite the tracker eventhough he was just a kit. He had managed to follow her and Ashpatch on several occasions. To her trained eyes it looked like he had decided to remain a kit in the camp today. Though sometimes Nighthunter wished that she herself were still just a kit. Perhaps then she would remember her own past. Where her parents had gone, and why she had wandered out into the forest the night the foxes attacked her. Soemtimes she wondered whether any of those questions would, or could ever be answered, but then again she knew that in time everything would become clear.

She rounded the a small bend and came face to face with Riptalon. He looked well, and she was sure to watch out for him like she usually did. Couldn`t have the deputy gettting stuck in a tree while on the border. She stood up tall and greeted him cheerfully.Then huried to follow him. When he stopped and scented she did the same, and her fur bristled. There was an unwanted visitor in there territory, and here she was thinking that it was going to be such a nice day. Her eyes glowed as she looked out for the trespasser.

She wanted to collapse from sorrow when the cat came into veiw. The poor female was battered and covered in the forests foliage. Her shoulder seeped blood, and she looked as though she had been fighting something. Nighthunter could scent no prey nearby,and it was logical to guess that this cat had frightened them away. She looked to Riptalon for an order, or perhaps permission to help this cat, because Nighthunter felt deeply disturbed by the tortoiseshells appearance.Can we really just leave her here, or do we have to ask her to leave? Both seem so cruel, and I know its our duty not to bring sickness into the clan, but Riptalon I know your having second thoughts about sending her away.What if this were one of us? It would be diffrent sure, and no doubt taken care of straight away, or even if it were a cat from another clan. They would be taken in and taken care of then sent away, or held prisoner. Either seemed much better then sending them to fend for themselves. Her heart leapt, but she knew that she couldn`t risk harming the clan with her sickness. Crying she cat or not, it wasn`t a good idea. Elkstar was still healing himself, and what if he keeled over from seeig the intruder. Nighthunter meant no disrespect towards there leader, but if Ficklestar could fall off a rock and die, then Elkstar might die of anger or worry. Since she was out ranked though, this was Riptalon`s decision,and whatever it was she would stand by it. She nudged him a little as if saying" What should we do?"





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I tried to kill the pain
but only brought more
so much more
I lay dying
and I'm pouring crimson regret and betrayal
I'm dying, praying, bleeding and screaming
am I too lost to be saved
am I too lost?


A rustle could be heard to the right, sending off warning bells through her head. However the small she-cat ignored that, letting herself wipe her paw across her face first. It was while drawing in a long breath when she smelled the other cat. In truth she hadn't gotten enough air while crying so she'd been trying to fix that and now.....she was smelling something. It took her body a mere moment to stiffen in warning as the scent reached the glands in her mouth. Terror and shame clashed clearly in her emerald gaze as she whipped her head around. There they landed on a large gray tomcat, his golden eyes narrowed into slits. Instantly a low warning growl burst from somewhere deep in her throat, a little uneven as the terror settled in the pit of her belly. He looked more than menacing and her instinct told her to be cautious. However instead of laying there obviously in a nonthreatening manner she scrambled awkwardly and painfully to her paws. Her emerald green eyes narrowed into dangerous slits and she curled her lips back in warning. Once on her feet she realized that escape was impossible, and that realization began to settle with her fear.

"I didn't scent anything!" She snarled, panic turning her stomach upside down. Unconsciously the tortoiseshell stumbled backward, wincing as hot blood gushed down the side of her shoulder. Ice hot pain lashed through her body and an instant dizziness took over. Steady, I'm alright this is going to be alright theres only one.......fox-dung! Quietly the she-cat clamped her mouth shut, keeping the moan of pain and terror somewhere deep in her chest. Desperately she tired to hide how scared she was, scared that she was suddenly outnumbered. On any other day maybe it would have been possible to get free, but not with her shoulder never with her hurt shoulder. In the back of her mind somewhere she felt completely annoyed with herself, mostly for showing so much weakness. She was so hungry now that it didn't matter, and as that thought registered she wondered if she was going to die. Slowly doubt curled itself around her mind, telling her there wasn't any way to win. No! Never! I can't back down now! Even if they've seen my bad side, which is just downright humiliating really!

"I've done nothing so why does it matter?" She made the words harsh and cold, biting instead of unsteady with fear. Her emotions were firmly under check now, even if her body trembled ever so slightly. She made herself stand firm as the other cat came a step closer. Her terror mounted with each step her opponent took, and she tried desperately to keep herself from becoming sick. Calm, calm, stay calm. I can do this, I know I can.....somehow.


my God my tourniquet
return to me salvation
my God my tourniquet
return to me salvation


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Character Mood:; Humiliated really, and terrified
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The tom's small, round ears were already cast back against his skull when the warm, dark fur of Nighthunter whispered against his own. He realized she'd followed, of course-- what warrior would allow the deputy to barge off alone into unknown danger? Luckily for him, there was nothing life-threatening here in the clearing, even though he seemed to attract accidents. If he'd been a leader, he'd probably have lost half of his lives by now. Luckily for him, he still had only one mortal chance to keep his paws on the earth of the living world, and StarClan took pity on his helplessness and helped Honeyleaf drag him back to life over and over. Though he didn't know how much even StarClan could do if he showed up with yet another mortal wound or appeared with another deadly sickness, his honey-and-white friend would have a fit. It's a good thing for me this loner isn't much of a threat-- but it's bad for her. She too, was in the uncomfortable position of dying. Riptalon didn't like that feeling, it made him grumpy. Since he was a cat seldom even harsh, grumpiness was only the result of powerful fatigue or one of his frequent close calls with StarClan's paws.

Nontheless, though he disliked the notion of the young warrior coming into a potentially hazardous situation with him, the knowledge that the dark, smoky she-cat was there to back him up relieved him somewhat. Nevertheless, as his cold, emotionless yellow eyes scanned the aggressive and obviously terrified loner's ragged frame, he could hardly hold back his revulsion. Not at the cat's condition, though blood ran down her thin side from the festering wound-- it was that she'd gotten this way. Who had done this to her? Why had she not gone to a medicine cat? But even as the horrified thoughts entered the broad gray head, he was answered. Loners fight to survive, and they have no healers. They are alone. If one is injured and does not heal, then they die. That is survival of the fittest, outside the Clans.

Had he been younger he would have been devastated, illusions shattered about the sheltered life he'd lived-- being as he was, coming into middle age, with several lifetimes of sorrows in the dust behind him, he was merely filled with fierce compassion. Outside the Clans, the barbarian cats may do whatever they wish, he thought fiercely, eyes the color of sunlight drilling into the matted she-cat with thoughtful fire. But she is on Clan land now, even if she was trespassing to get here, and we will not turn her away like selfish rogues. Mind made up, though a slight pang of guilt hit him and made him hesitate, he looked over at Nighthunter.

The degree of sorrow in the amber orbs of the young queen made up his mind for him. He was not alone in his empathy-- Nighthunter too understood compassion, and she at least would stand by him. It was his choice, however, his choice as the ranking tom. Would he extend a thread of caring to the ill she-cat, or would he ask her politely to leave? It was a no-brainer, and though there was a chance she could spread her sickness to the Clan, Riptalon knew it was a risk he had to take. He would not be who he was if he could seriously consider leaving a cat, surely to die, like this.

So after a moment, face unreadable, while the painful replies were gasped out through clenched teeth, the deputy could do more than admire the she-cat's spirit in the face of suffering. Slowly, he tilted his broad head to one side, his ears relaxing from their tense positions at either side of his skull to prick with interest and worry. After a long moment, silence stretching between the two cats as the giant gray tomcat measured her up with his frozen yellow eyes, he mewed softly, "Great StarClan." This too hung suspended in the air for a moment as he turned his flattened face back towards Nighthunter, sending her another calm, mature look. It was odd how here, when he was actually needed to make important decisions, he was capable of that calm, sensible state of mind otherwise cluttered with the day-by-day worries and chores of being a cuddly furball inside a monsterous body. What was she thinking, he wondered-- what did this dying loner think as she drug her fevered body into Clan hunting grounds, so desperate for the merest scrap of food that she would risk entering a place few rogues or loners dared to enter. What did the young cat think as from the bushes emerged a cat of size she had probably never seen, a monster of ash and cinders, followed by the rest of his patrol?

Slowly he turned his great gaze back to the bleeding she-cat, and spoke once again softly, but urgently. "True enough, you have done nothing wrong," the ash-pelted deputy meowed, his snub muzzle cast slightly downward for the smaller she-cat beneath. He concealed his concern behind a brisk tone that surprised him with its diplomacy. "However, you are on ThunderClan territory, obviously with the intention of stealing prey. You will come with us to our camp, where your injury will be seen to while we decide on your fate." His slitted eyes were peaceful, yet something in the tone of the tom's voice made it clear this was an order. He felt almost amazed by how neatly he had accomplished it-- it was not a soft offer of help, sure to be turned down by the prideful she-cat though she needed it perhaps more than she knew. It was not a show of weakness, of ThunderClan's softness towards dying cats, that some of his warriors might object to. The she-cat would come with them as temporary prisoner, and he and Nighthunter were more than enough to see that in her weakened condition that she would. Glancing over at the dark she-cat, questing almost for approval, that vague sense of surprise within himself remained. Am I becoming a leader without knowing it?

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All will be well
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Show me some determination
Show me the measure of your dedication
I need to see just a reflection of your inspiration
Don't you break down on me


Breathe in and out, in and out. Slowly the tortoiseshell let her body expand with a welcoming amount of air. Her green eyes stayed firmly trained on the cats before her, nervous as the silence began to stretch out before him. Say something, anything! At least let me know I'm going to die! Or are you all so cruel you won't even allow us that pleasure?

"Great StarClan." The words were a shock, and the moment she heard them the she-cat jerked back. Her green eyes flickered with brief confusion as to who starclan was and she tried desperately to hide her slip. Quickly the shield was back on, hiding her emotions once more. She opened her maw, ready to speak once more when she was interrupted. "True enough, you have done nothing wrong, The words made her bristle, and a low growl slipped from her throat. It took her a moment to realized he had said something else. Something that left her mouth hanging open in astonishment. "However, you are on ThunderClan territory, obviously with the intention of stealing prey. You will come with us to our camp, where your injury will be seen to while we decide on your fate." The words reverberated through her skull, sending a swift shock through every limb in her body. ........NO I mustn't go with them! Its a trick, run, hide! Something, move your feet you idiot!

"No!" The word was almost spat at him, said with venom and fear. She lurched forward with a harsh laugh, her eyes flickering from cat to cat. Pondering which one she could take in a fight that was obviously hopeless. However, even as the thought crossed her mind the she-cat instantly rejected it. Knowing she was much to tired, and in so very much pain. Maybe being taken prisoner wouldn't be such a bad thing, they could help me....its possible they mean no harm. Yet she couldn't exactly get rid of that feeling somewhere deep in the pit of her stomach. The feeling that something that was going happen, and very soon. It was with that thought that she couldn't quite stop the harsh laugh from escaping her maw. Quickly she cut the somewhat insane laugh short. Her pelt growing hot in a matter of moments, while she averted her green eyes. "What makes you think I'll go?"

She took a slow step forward once more, closer to the large tom than before. She was trying to distract them with movement while she tried to hide how shaky her voice sounded. Just another few steps, careful now I'm almost there. Carefully she took another tentative step forward, her green eyes still guarded with suspicion. Her eyes flicked toward Nighthunter and than back to Riptalon, narrowing as she processed his large size. He was so much larger than her, it was obvious that this was going to be near impossible. Never ever give up. I shall always go down fighting!


Three days in the rain and I ain't had no sleep
But I wont break down now, I got a promise to keep
Showing my determination
cause thats the way I am


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The glaowing amber orbs searched every detail of the she cat. If she missed the slightest warning that an attack was coming, then she put them both at risk. Nighthunter knew that she had to stay alert, but she kept lettign her guard down. This cat was almost dead where she was standing in her condition. Surely she wasn`t a threat to them. There wasn`t much to watch out for. It wasn`t like she could summon an army to attack them or anything. She was weak and alone, and virtually powerless. It was uninteresting for her actually. Nighthunter always did like a little excitement while she was out patroling the territory, but this wasn`t anything to get excited about. In fact what was she thinking. Her mind needed to be on the task at hand, and there she was letting her guard down like a newborn kit. Her pelt bristled over her own embarrasment.

She watched as Riptalon made a point to look less frigtening. Of course most of the time he didn`t mean to be that way, at least thats what she thought. Riptalon to her was to much of a big softie to be all mean like some clan members had said.She always had looked up to him, and wanted her kits to respect him just as much. Surely Burningkit would definatly mind him, because of all the things he could learn. She knew that Roughkit would at least attemt to get to know him. It seemed Ashpatch liked him well enough. In fact that reminded her. She hadn`t seen Ashpatch all day, and he was supposed to be in camp with the kits today. Worry pricked her fur, but she tried her best to ignore it. Something flarred in the back of her mind, telling her that something was wrong. She wasn`t sure if it was her mothering instincts or something else entirely. It took all her will to not sprint back to the camp to see if her family was alright, but she knew that if she left on a hunch that something was amiss and nothing was then it would be her fault if Riptalon was hurt.

Standing still and looking tough couldn`t ave been harder at that moment. Then after what seemed like ages Riptalon spoke. He offered her nothing, but an escourt to the camp, and a small promise of help. He was concerned, and she knew it. She smiled the pride being to much fo rher to hold in. She would have hated to leave that cat, or worse attack her like this. Then the she cat started to look more terrified and at the same time she looked more agitated. Quickly her solid muscles jumped and in no time she was crouched down and waiting to pounce at the she cat. Her eyse were on fire, and it looked as though she were ready to spirt venom. Her tail lashed wickedly in defence. No one can catch them like that. Besides how dubm was this cat. They were trying to help her. Didn`t she understand that? "You sure about that decisoin, because if you attack us i`ll chase you out f all the territories myself!"



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From the moment the words left his gray muzzle, reaching out and fading with the faintest whispers into the air like tendrils of fog, the effect on the loner was immediate. Utter shock and confusion cloaked the tabby-and-white face in completely different colors; sending rippling waves of surprise cascading out from those unnervingly luminous green eyes. A moment later, it was gone-- those emotions that it seemed she feared to show. A powerful tide of sympathy abruptly swayed the ashen tom's massive figure, as he realized how his appearance would have aided him in the rogue world. A world where one did not show their feelings for fear of being thought weak, a world where cats could fight bitterly and die without the gentle touch of a medicine cat's herbs to ease their way through the gates of death. She probably saw him on her own terms, an emotionless statue cut jaggedly from slate and shadow, huge in mass and icy in gaze. Showing anything else besides scorn and bravery in the situation would be demeaning in the face of such a winterly onslaught, despite the warmth in his tone.

He could hardly imagine what it was like to seek, every day, to hide how one truly felt, rather than try to prove that one was more than a cruel face. Riptalon curled his fluffy tail closer around his wide, round paws, the sun whose suffocating golden blanket had seemed so utterly miserable to him a moment ago abruptly forgotten in the face of another's terrible troubles. He felt sorry for her-- and still admired her. However, he was still surprised at her answer. "No!" The poison, the utter scorn in her words set him back a pace. Riptalon's small gray ears pricked and he actually blinked once or twice. The warrior had thought surely the sickened loner would have enough sense, even in this condition, to realize they were trying to help her and meant no harm. At the least, even if she percieved cruelty in everyone she met, she should have realized she had nothing to lose. Blinking mildly, he probed softly, "You realize that if not seen you, you will die?" he asked. The bluntness gave him a pang of the heart, but it seemed the she-cat was in no condition to appreciate diplomacy.

At his side, Nighthunter's faintly striped, smoky pelt was beginning to bristle, her amber orbs flickering with something like outrage. Riptalon touched her on the shoulder with the tip of his tail, hoping she'd calm down. Any aggression would surely be interpereted as an attack. He didn't want to fight this pitiful figure of a loner, didn't want to hurt something already hurt so much. A laugh was bubbling from the tabby's throat now as she began to stumble towards them, a laugh bordering on hysteria, and Riptalon realized with a sinking stomach she was probably much worse than they'd thought. Whatever illness or fever gave that eerie shine to her verdant eyes was acting on her in ways he did not know how to fathom. Honeyleaf was truly her best bet to survive-- but now he knew she might not listen to any kind of reason. Who knew what she would do or decide in the sweating madness of fever? Riptalon knew how he felt with his thick, scruffy pelt whose shadowy, smoky hue only drank in the golden light more greedily. He would not want to be burning with fever and pain in this situation.

The loner was talking again, that same defensive snarl in her words. What made them think she would go? Well, most cats were fairly sensible, and all sense led to her accompanying them back to camp. What could they do to her that was more than she was already suffering? Unfortunately, Riptalon had begun to grimly realize how unbalanced this poor, ragged loner could really be. She could be completely insane, for all he knew. This was the kind of cat he wanted to nurse back to health? Yet he knew he could make no other decision. What kind of a cat would he be if he turned her away now, knowing that in days, perhaps hours, crows would gather to dine on her corpse? In his thoughts, he missed Nighthunter's warning hiss of rage and snapped to only when she snarled out a quick threat. He was about to quickly silence her when his yellow eyes darted back to the loner. She was stalking towards them, advancing, no doubt with the intention to go out fighting. Riptalon almost groaned, but silently thanked the younger warrior for bringing him to.

Both their gazes, one fierce orange, one icy yellow bored into the loner she-cat from where she stood. "That's not a good idea, loner" Riptalon told her firmly, twitching his long whiskers. Of course it's not a good idea. She's hardly up to my chest, and she's almost dead to boot. Blinking slowly, mildly, he added quietly, "I think you'll go because if you don't, you're going to die. You're either going to die overexerting yourself trying to fight us, when we don't want to fight; or you're going to die from that injury on your shoulder. What do you have to lose?" Suddenly he straightened up, it becoming rapidly more obvious how much larger he was than this starving feline. Did she truly think she could succeed in attacking them, two fit, powerful warriors?

The deputy's soft voice lost all commanding tone and conformed back to its usual velvety tenor, a voice which spoke in an undertone almost desperate. "My name is Riptalon, and we want to help you." And we will, whether she likes it or not, if I have to drag her unconscious body back to Honeyleaf to get it done... That would be uncomfortable, however, and he wished with all his heart that somehow he could prevail upon the unbalanced she-cat to accept their offer, to come along, and perhaps hardest of all-- trust them. Trust, that which would probably be hardest for her to achieve. Trust, which was all but a dream in the rogue world-- the world where of which she had come, a world which she would leave behind for a time as she entered their own...

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The new day dawns
And I am practicing my purpose once again
It is fresh and it is fruitful if I win . . .
But if I lose, I don’t know
I’ll be tired but I will turn and I will go
Only guessing ’til I get there then I’ll know
Ohh, I will know
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« Reply #8 on Oct 10, 2009, 12:10am »
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How can I feel abandoned even when the world surrounds me
How can I bite the hand that feeds the strangers all around me
How can I know so many
Never really knowing anyone


Closer, just a bit closer. Her paw steps began to grow hesitant however as she approached his full size though. Her head began throbbing, leaving her stomach to turn nervously. It was then that she realized the other cat was crouching down. Instantly the she-cat stiffened up, although it was slow compared to what her normal reflexes were. A soft hiss spilled from her drawn back lips as the other she-cat's threat reached her ears. However, when the other cat spoke she let herself go quiet. Instead swinging her head around to look at him once more. Am I really going to die? Slowly the she-cat came to a complete stop, her long claws digging into the loose soil beneath her. Her legs shook, and confusion spread across her face. This time however, the tattered tortoiseshell didn't try to hide her show of weakness.

"I think you'll go because if you don't, you're going to die. You're either going to die overexerting yourself trying to fight us, when we don't want to fight; or you're going to die from that injury on your shoulder. What do you have to lose?" his words reverberated through her skull, sending chills spreading through her body. He was right though, and she knew it with every ragged breath she took, if she didn't go now she would be dead very soon. Slowly the she-cat retracted her claws, and then took a painful step backward.

"I-I don't know if I can trust you," She chocked out, her voice hoarse with pain. How it hurt her to be showing them her weakness, to be giving up without so much as lifting a claw. The rational part of her brain was telling her that she was right, right to surrender. To give in and get all the help she could, because if she didn't her last few moments on earth would filled with bitter loneliness and agony. With a soft curse, she realized the world was growing blurry. Than she could feel the hot tears spilling down her muzzle, dribbling onto her dirt caked paws. Slowly she raised her head, green eyes glazed and watchful.

"My name is Riptalon, and we want to help you." Green eyes closed with a confusion and a tremble spread from head to tail tip. Carefully she drew in a long breath, her chest heaving with the mere effort. Riptalon, am I really going to put my life within your paws? Or am I letting you save my life? Her eyes opened, brilliant with a blazing fire as she flickered them from Nighthunter to Riptalon.

"Fine," She meowed softly, trying desperately to keep her voice even. Another step forward, brought her next to the large gray tom once more. She barely even came up to his chest, he was so huge. If the other cat hadn't been with him she would have wondered if they were all this size. Instead of pondering on this though she looked up into his golden eyes, and put her life in his paws. "My name is Poppy, and I'll come willingly."


Playing a lion being led to a cage
I turn from a thief to a beggar
From a god to God save me


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Slowly Nighthunter stood, and flattened her bristling fur. It seemed like the she cat had changed her mind afterall. She sighed in relief. It had unsettled her knowing that they had been a few seconds away from attacking such a horribly beaten cat, even if she was a loner. Besides it wasn`t exactly something she woudl want on her mind afterwards. She didn`t want her family knowing she chassed off a loner that could barely talk let alone stand. She nodded when she finally introduced herself. Poppy was a name that was used often in the clans. Perhaps this cat had some decendant from the forest. It was possible she guessed. She watched as Poppy walked next to Riptalon. She was so small compared to him, and not quite as big as herself. She hoped that her kits would behave while this loner was in the camp. Rainkit could be a pain in the tail, and Burningkit might try and scare her off.

She was glad that Poppy had decided to get help rather than die. She wondered where the loners ended up, or if this cat knew of Starclan. Did she had a family of her own. Her mind burned with questions, but she knew that it wasn`t right for her to be so curious. It was her way of living, and Nighthunter was fine where she was. What would she have been like had she been a loner? Would she have ended up like this cat? Though if she were in her place she woudl have put up more of a fight, in most cases. She decided to walked slightly behind them so that she could keep an eye on things, and possibly hunt on the way back. Surely a fox, or badger would have smelled this cats blood by now.She decided to try and make the she cat feel more comfortable, and show her that she could be kind, since so far she had been snarling at her the whole time."So Poppy, do you have a family?" It was just a general question, but she wondered if it would make the she cat feel defensive again. Hopefully she wouldn`t think that she was tryign to scratch out information from her.




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a new life she has found
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The words fell from his lips with more force than he’d intended, and as they splintered the air he saw the she-cat’s brilliant eyes fill with the glittering sheen of tears. His stormy fur had been fluffed out, his body’s response to a threat so that he appeared even bigger than his massive frame already was. Immediately it dampened down, coat deflating meekly as unhappiness flecked the tom’s golden-yellow eyes. Harsh words… Perhaps the loner had been kidding herself, forcing herself to believe she still had a chance, that her grotesque injury was merely a scratch. What else could she have done? Lay down and given up? No, immediately Riptalon rejected the thought—Poppy’s spirit was admirable to the point of stubbornness, and he knew instinctively that the ragged tortoiseshell would rather lie to herself than face the truth—that she needed help. Of course, who would give it to her? Who would help her in a world where it was all for one’s self, where the very definition of ‘rogue’ was a cat who cared only about himself? The deputy could hardly imagine what it was like to live with a heart so cold that one could see a cat suffering as cruelly as Poppy was and just walk away. Nevertheless, his voice kind and gentle as it was had shattered the illusion that she was going to make it— or perhaps he should say, make it on her own.

How foreign they must seem to her—such strangers who offered help so bluntly, to the point where an unspoken threat hung in the air if she did not cooperate. He didn’t blame her for fearing trust, didn’t blame her for hesitating to throw her life into the paws of others in a world where no doubt she’d been betrayed time over time again. Truly—what was there to trust? Indeed, the only thing that’d changed her mind was that she had no choice left. What more could they do to her? The glassy sheen to the verdant eyes wasn’t all from the frustrated tears, he knew her body burned with fever just by glancing at her. And he was far from a medicine cat—though to be fair he’d learned his way around the medicine den after all the times he’d lay bleeding or sickened within it. A sickly cat was an overstatement—Riptalon, for all his great size, was also a great magnet for trouble that could come at him from any direction. Was Poppy just another avenue towards the means of this talent? He shook his broad head silently to himself, the tom’s grizzled mane of slate-colored fur shifting. Riptalon’s frozen ocher gaze skimmed the small, battered form before him again, taking her all in. She really needs our help, and even she’s not dumb enough to deny it any longer. Indeed, the she-cat’s desperate last approach had been aborted, and she sat now before him with tears slowly tracing tracks through the dust caked in her fur.

After a moment she looked up at them, and she met their gazes evenly, though shame still lurked in the shadows of those vivid irises. With her body shaking with emotion, the loner meowed quietly her name and agreed to come along. Relief made Riptalon giddy, but still the guilt for breaking it to her so harshly hung over his head. It was necessary. If I’d been any less blunt, she would have attacked before I’d persuaded her, and surely would have been in worse shape. So nodding with relief and standing back up, swishing his tail and lightly bumping Nighthunter with his shoulder to silently communicate their triumph, he mewed “Glad to meet you, Poppy. We’re going to be returning to our camp now—our healer can take care of you once we get there, all right?” Wanting to waste no time lest it turn out to be too late, Riptalon turned and padded back into the brush, flicking his tail in a friendly way to reassure the patched she-cat. Along their way, Nighthunter added a friendly question, which relieved the flat-faced tom. Perhaps it could take the loner’s mind off her surely terrible injury and her helplessness around them. Riptalon nodded and fell into step beside the two she-cats, lightly padding along like a great ashen statue on Poppy’s other flank. Just in case her nerve broke and she decided to bolt. ”Nighthunter had already birthed her first litter of kits before she was ten moons old,” the scruffy tom purred, ”Her kits will be apprenticed soon.” That turned his thoughts towards Elkstar again, which was never something good to be brooding about. Maybe when he got back to camp and announced Poppy’s presence, he could get Elkstar to do something about the kits and apprentices who needed ceremonies. That would be a good end to the day.

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When you push her around?
Do you feel better now
as she falls to the ground?
Well I'll tell you my friend
one day this world's going to end
As your lies crumble down
a new life she has found.
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« Reply #11 on Oct 20, 2009, 11:26pm »
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Is there a cure for this disease?
Or will I die in misery?
The pleasure in my life is gone
How did I last this long?


Slowly Poppy pulled herself to her paws, watching each cat warily as she did so. Her mind turned slowly, trying desperately to think through the fog. It was hard to understand what was really going on. Except that they were moving toward where the cats must sleep. I wonder if any of this clan business is true. All the rumors about their bloodthirsty nature, and about the problems they bring. It can't all be true, after all they are helping."I can't believe I'm doing this." Poppy moaned softly, her claws digging deeply into the loose earth as she limped beside the cats. Despite the deep shame, and pain that rippled through her body Poppy kept her head raised up. Her green eyes locked merely on what was ahead of her. You only have yourself to blame for this. and I really need to learn how to keep my big mouth shut! Poppy shook her head as the thought passed through her numb brain. It was truly her own fault, that and her stupid stubborn nature. She couldn't back down from anything and now it had gotten into an even bigger mess. Something that not even Poppy could fathom herself, still shocked and a little confused at what was going on around her. Suddenly a wonderful scent passed beneath her nose, making her eyes open a bit wider. A soft sigh spilled from her open mouth as she drank in the scents of the forest. Never had she been so deep inside this mysterious place before. If not in the situation that she was currently in maybe Poppy would have explored more.

"So Poppy, do you have a family?" The black she-cat asked her, her voice friendly enough. Poppy swung her head around in surprise, and her fevered eyes narrowed in distrust. Poppy was startled that the she-cat was speaking to her at all. Only moments before she had been snarling at her. Maybe she feels guilty. For a moment though she was silent, pondering on whether she should say anything or not. Although it probably wouldn't matter if she told them who her family was, it wasn't going to help her now. However, before she could respond to the question, Riptalon spoke.

”Nighthunter had already birthed her first litter of kits before she was ten moons old,” Poppy let her green eyes flicker briefly between them. Surprised as she did so to hear the large tomcat purring. It was such a strange sound coming from someone so menacing looking. How can someone so large and menacing really be so kind and patient. ”Her kits will be apprenticed soon.”Apprenticed.......that must mean training their young. Aren't these cats some sort of fighting force, stealing food from other cats lands. Always having feuds?[i]

"My mother lives in twoleg place with my three siblings." She meowed suddenly, her voice soft. "While my father lives somewhere down near where I make my nest." The words had left her mouth before she even realized what she was doing. She didn't really think it was any of their business, but she didn't think they would care either way. Briefly she wondered if she should say something about Riptalon's earlier comment. However, nothing came to mind. Poppy had never been around kits before, not since she was one herself. Of course she had the occasional run in with a mother and her kits but Poppy never stayed long. She never liked to be trapped in one place to long, the longer she stayed somewhere the more she got attached. And as Poppy knew getting attached to anything was never a good idea, so she kept herself isolated. Away from the world around her, fending only for herself. Only stopping at the briefest of times to visit her mother and siblings. For a moment she wondered what it would be like to live within such a large family, or group that the cats before her did. She couldn't even begin to imagine what it was like really. The only feeling she could seem to muster up was that of jealously. A sharp, swift emotion that left her startled for a moment. Although it didn't take her long to understand what she was jealouse about. The loneliness that she subjected herself to was slowly killing her inside. Poppy had naturally, from the very beginning, been a very social cat. Always wandering around from garden to garden and getting to know everyone. When she'd run away to be with her father, she thought the world had sounded exciting and fun. Something full of wonder and hope, hope that Poppy soon learned were never going to happen. Suddenly, Poppy inhaled sharply, as the memories of her kit hood flooded her senses. The warmth, and the feeling of safety. However, even if she missed that safe world Poppy would never go back. She would never be able to fit in anywhere but where she was today. A riff raff, a loner who kept merely to herself. Never allowing anyone to close, and always caring for the number one person. Herself.


There was a time I had seen
The beauty of mankind
And unbridled love
Now I feel the anguish
Trapped within my soul
As I give in
The end is here for me
In this lifetime
Welcoming my demise


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« Reply #12 on Oct 21, 2009, 11:04am »
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Nighhunter lived for her family. The clan, her kits, and just the life of a warrior in general. She couldn`t fathom a life outside the warrior code. A life alone, where you lived each day constantly watching your back. If every cat was her enemy, Nighthunter knew that she wouldn`t be able to live through a life like that. She was to used to having others around her to protect and support. Perhaps when she was an apprentice she would have had a diffrent opinion, but sense becoming a mother,she had opened her eyes to how fragile life was. After loosing two of there kits, and two of Stoneflowers. This loner must regret being so lonely, or does she even notice it. To her we must look like savages. Fighting ourselves over territories and training for survival, but technically by the looks of it we`re fairing way better then her. She was grateful that Riptalon was there. If she had been patrolling alone, the loner might have attacked rather then listened, and I might have just chased her off with no authority in the clan to allow her in for help. Of course if he hadn`t decided to help her I would have clawed his whiskers off, and he probably knew that to.

She noded as Poppy described her family. The way she spoke of them was like they hardly ever saw one another. Her kits were to be apprentices soon, and Nighthunter couldn`t dream of living away from them.Burningkit and Roughkit were undoubably making Ashpatch lose his mind with there games by now. She was eager to get to the camp.What would Honeyleaf say? Nighthunter had faith in there leader Elkstar, and knew that he would allow Poppy healing herbs. She wondered who her kits would recieve as mentors. It was to bad Riptaoln was training Oakpaw, because he would be a good choice for Burningkit.Sighing she fell into a trance like walk. This was her life, her home, her family, and she would life it to its fullest.Riptalon might be the best choice for her son, but he would still become a great warrior reguardless of his mentor. Roughkit will need ine that wil guide his easily swayed heart. Poppy is lucky to have fallen on our boarders.Any of the other clans would have chased her off. Whether we want to admit it or not, we are more easy going with outsiders. Its not nessecarily a weakness.

OK ITS DONE^^ <3 - not a good post bleh bleh- horrible muse i wrote this in school, so yeah. anyway it works to move this thread along so here it is^^...............-vanishes in nightly way that only I can, cause its you know Nightly...I guess.... dun ask, i`m bored - poofs-




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comments: I tried to sneak on during school to get it done,but idk if i`ll finish it or not.


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« Reply #13 on Oct 23, 2009, 11:24pm »
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The sun had begun to skim the fringes of high, wispy clouds, sending passing strands of cool shade across the baked grasses. Riptalon’s large, soft paws pressed into the twigs and debris on the forest floor, taking fleeting relief in the cool, moist soil underneath the dry layer above. Since he was not hunting, twigs splintered and fractured under his sheer weight; bracken crunching loudly underpaw. Even so, he was quiet for a cat of his size. The quiet buzz of his purr hummed from his throat and chest as they padded through the forest. Technically, they were cutting their patrol short—but how likely was it that there was a pack of invading rogues on the few foxlengths of the border they hadn’t inspected? Poppy had been a surprise— he certainly hadn’t expected to see the tortoiseshell huddled in the shadow of their territory, body crying silently out with hunger and pain. Perhaps it had been the eyes that were so unnerving—glossy with the sheen of fever, luminously bright in a way that seemed unnatural. He’d known at first sight that there was something wrong, just from the loner’s gaze, that couldn’t be attributed to mere tears. How sick exactly was she? They didn’t know how long she’d been limping around as her injury festered, how long it had been since claws had raked through her fur and condemned her life in one foul stroke. If nothing else, Riptalon would show them—whoever had done this to them—that they were wrong.

Vague doubts still whirled around the inside of his broad skull, however—he was no healer and he knew just by sight how bad the injury was. What would the blonde-and-white medicine cat think when the gray giant dumped the loner at her feet and went, ”Fix this.” Probably claw his ears off. Ouch. I don’t want her mad at me, ever again, Riptalon thought, half flinching, half amused. Honeyleaf was, truly, among a Clan of his friends, his best—though she’d been just a kit when he was a full warrior, she truly understood him. Musing over it as they walked, he wondered again what it had been which had set her off so violently that day when Elkstar had first come out of his den. She was just upset that her patient was overexerting himself, he uneasily told himself, swishing the grizzly plume of his ashen tail behind him. And when you tried to hide from a kit in her den she got a little exasperated. Nontheless, the brief flash of her green eyes—normally so warm and filled with compassion—icy and venomous, filled him with hurt and dread. What had he done? He had not been the only target of that poisonous gaze, either—Sunsetstain too had found those emerald eyes leveled warningly at her, spite seething from the medicine cat’s elegant frame. It filled Riptalon with confusion—what had they done? What had either of them done?

The shade of the forest was a relief after the golden rain of heat whose rays had baked his heavy body into a furry crisp. His scruffy, shaggy gray fur was at home here in the forest—not the blinding white so obvious in summer but so adept in winter, nor the black whose tones blended into night but not day. The neutral shade of stone and shadow, of ash and cloud—it was everywhere in the forest, in any time of day, in any season. If he stood still and closed his adderlike gaze, he became a statue of frozen slate. Realizing his reptilian eyes had closed he reopened them and hastily veered from the looming bark before his snub muzzle, padding back and rejoining Nighthunter and Poppy, who’d been walking in silence until the fevered loner responded, "My mother lives in twolegplace with my three siblings, while my father lives somewhere down near where I make my nest." Nodding, a little sympathetic towards the distant aspect to their relationship, the deputy meowed ”I see. Poppy, not to be intrusive—but do you mind telling us exactly how you got your… injury?” His soft, velvety voice was concerned and a little timid as he asked. He didn’t mean to bring her mind back to what surely must be an agonizing wound, but his first priority was keeping this cat alive. If it’d been more than a few days… he didn’t know if Honeyleaf could heal her. Then he would know forever more that he’d given a stranger hope and snatched it away, that her death was on his shaded paws.

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Anything's hard to change
But hey I got you down on your knees again
You watch the sky
It's a pale parade of passing clouds
And the memories that I made
Of a laughing girl
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